ext_103170 ([identity profile] sekitx2.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mugen_edamame 2013-09-08 11:50 pm (UTC)

Oops double reply hours later, sorry. LJ did NOTHING when I clicked post comment and then I couldn't get LJ to do anything.

I don't have an A03 account.
Err, the spacing between paragraphs got bigger as the story went on.

"tosses her clothes in the dishwasher" Did you really mean dishwasher??

A little too rambling for my headache to handle dear, gomen. L&K don't come off too likeable in some spots.

Lavi's toothy smile is visible, even in the low light. "If I could put you t'bed, baby, th'sky's th'limit for me, isn't it?" ^_____^

Thanks!!

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